Sleepwalking in Daylight

April 30, 2009

in Adoption, Books

I cried, my sobs not easily muffled. In the cramped airline seat I wept, hoping the woman next to me wouldn’t notice. Damn Elizabeth Flock.

No, Elizabeth Flock wasn’t my seat mate. Elizabeth Flock is the author of the novel I just finished. I’d read a review of the book in the Denver Post and I contacted the publisher for my own review copy.

Sleepwalking in Daylight is a suburban everymom story told by Samantha, a SAHM who endured infertility and adoption and who now parents a teenage girl (via adoption) and twin 8 year old boys (via IVF). She and her husband, Bob, have lost all connection with each other, and Samantha finds intimacy with another man she meets in a Starbucks. This new connection fills Samantha’s void and consumes her.

Alternate chapters are told by Cammy, Samantha’s 16 year-old daughter. Cammy was born addicted and placed for adoption by her birthmother at age 2. Bob was never on board with the adoption, and he later told Cammy of her adoptedness in a scarring fashion. Cammy’s parents are self-absorbed and unhappy, her twin brothers have each other, and she spirals down into a morass of drugs and debasing activities.

What this book is not: great literature, complicated, deep, lengthy.

What this book is: hard to put down, heartbreaking, and, I would venture, controversial for those in the adoption triad.

  • Some adoptees will be incensed with the way Cammy is portrayed; some will point to the Primal Wound and say, “See?”
  • Some birthparents will claim the firstmom was portrayed as stereotypical and inconsequential.
  • Most adoptive parents will shudder at the parenting issues, inextricably entwined with adoption issues.

The literary technique called chiasm is present in Cammy’s adoption story. In between, there are roads not taken. What would her life had been like had her firstmom not placed her? Surely better, she is certain.

Samantha faces her roads not taken, too. What if she hadn’t pushed Bob so hard to adopt? What if she’d eased up on this particular (and shady) adoption? What if she had remained child-free? Would any of these routes have taken her to a happier place, where she was actually awake in her life?

I asked the author how she researched the Cammy character. How did she formulate the angst about her birthmother, the not fitting in, the lack of self-love? Were these things simply for storyline purposes, or was this character based on traits Elizabeth had observed in adopted people? Her answer:

“I did some research on at-risk teens, mostly by reading recent articles online. But I’d be lying if I said I did much more than that. I simply tried very hard to imagine what it would feel like to be Cammy. Feeling as if she didn’t fit in her own family. It’s hard enough for teens to try to fit in at school with their peers but at home Cammy was also desperate for a connection that was ever so slightly out of reach. I felt incredibly sad for her. I think we all have a little Cammy in us, even if it’s just a tiny bit. I tried to tap in to that.

This is Elizabeth Flock’s fourth novel. She tells a good story in a real and conversational way. Her pre-novelist life was as a journalist for People and Time magazines.

In spite of the tears, I am glad I read this book. Sleepwalking in Daylight is billed as a story about marriage, but it also spoke volumes to me about parenting. The book reminds me to try and see life through my children’s eyes — and serves as a warning to keep me from sleepwalking through these parenting years.

 

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Kristin April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

It sounds great…and, I was amused that you also wrote a book review today. Great minds think alike.

Terra April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

SOunds wonderful. I am going to have to add it to my ever growing list. Thanks for a great review.

Kristin April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

It sounds great…and, I was amused that you also wrote a book review today. Great minds think alike.

Terra April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

SOunds wonderful. I am going to have to add it to my ever growing list. Thanks for a great review.

Banteringblonde April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

I’ll have to put this on my ever growing list!

Lavender Luz April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

It is a tough read, but I saw it as a cautionary tale to stay awake. In your marriage, as a parent.

nancy April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

I just can’t make myself sad anymore. I just read “I hope they serve beer in hell” because with so much sadness, even bittersweet, I can’t do it to myself anymore. I’m sure I am screwing myself by refusing, but is there ever a time you just can’t be sad anymore? (rhetorical)

DrSpouse April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

I know I have a bee in my bonnet about this, but I don’t see how <>anyone<> can class adoption at 2 from a drug-abusing mother as a case of “primal wound”…

I’ll shut up now.

Martha April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

Great review, I will have to check it out.

Brenna April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

Sounds like a tough read–emotionally tough, that is. But also worthwhile. I’ll add it to my cue as well. Thanks for the rec! I love reading your reviews, they’re always so thorough.

Banteringblonde April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

I’ll have to put this on my ever growing list!

Lavender Luz April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

It is a tough read, but I saw it as a cautionary tale to stay awake. In your marriage, as a parent.

nancy April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

I just can’t make myself sad anymore. I just read “I hope they serve beer in hell” because with so much sadness, even bittersweet, I can’t do it to myself anymore. I’m sure I am screwing myself by refusing, but is there ever a time you just can’t be sad anymore? (rhetorical)

DrSpouse April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

I know I have a bee in my bonnet about this, but I don’t see how <>anyone<> can class adoption at 2 from a drug-abusing mother as a case of “primal wound”…

I’ll shut up now.

Martha April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

Great review, I will have to check it out.

Brenna April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

Sounds like a tough read–emotionally tough, that is. But also worthwhile. I’ll add it to my cue as well. Thanks for the rec! I love reading your reviews, they’re always so thorough.

Sheri April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

I find your book reviews very valuable. It sounds like a great book. I’ll put it on the list.

Sheri April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

I find your book reviews very valuable. It sounds like a great book. I’ll put it on the list.

Kami April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

Thanks for sharing this. I wonder how my donor would find it. She wasn’t adopted, but always felt like an outsider in her own family.

Kami April 7, 2010 at 2:06 am

Thanks for sharing this. I wonder how my donor would find it. She wasn’t adopted, but always felt like an outsider in her own family.

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